Thursday, March 28, 2019

looker on poem

In He Puna kawenga we have been learning to write descriptions.To write descriptions you have to be good at noticing,observing and wondering.
We went around the school doing this then wrote
poems inspired by Frank Kendon's the Looker on.
                                  
And cars beeping at other cars
And people  swimming in the clear water
And hot rocks melting in the sun
And bird chirping to other
And rooms coming out to play
And bushes filled with spider webs
And bright blue sky too hard to look at
And people talking in class
And leaves crunching under your toes
And hot concrete burning your toes of

By Kingsley.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Kingsley
    I like your looker on poem because the color looks cool
    and it stands out to me. You are good at drawing too.

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